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millster66
(@millster66)
Trusted Member Customer

 How old are you:(16)

Are you fluent in speaking English: 

yes and can type quite quickly too.

Why do you want to join the whitelisted roleplaying community: 

i whould like to join because i whould like to do some proper rp not have kids running around kos and destroying the rp 

Do you have a working microphone:

I have a working microphone and headphones.

Have you had previous roleplaying experience:

I have loads of RP experience from playing Nylex servers

Character Backstory:

he is survivalist and his name is Nick Burkhardt i was enjoying the day when i heard a scream but seconds ago the girl on the radio said virus 212 had broken contament he ran out side with a old wooden rifle my his had and tryed to help but it was too late the zombie saw him and started charging towards me so i shot it the chest but it kept charging so i put my eye to the scope and was aming at the head then i shot it hit the ground and did not get back up so i started making my way to the city to warn people but it had already hit so i ran in to the city to try and find food or water to be continued. my Character weapons will be mostly a rifle/sniper and a pocket knife/butterfly knife  theanks for reading 🙂

 my steam link

http://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198082689630/

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Topic starter Posted : 24/06/2017 4:02 pm
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MrRawr
(@mrrawr)
Noble Member

I would vouch for millster

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Posted : 26/06/2017 5:55 pm
Surprise655
(@surprise655)

Top Notch Fellow, good Role Player, has an awesome voice + 1

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Posted : 29/06/2017 12:57 pm
Fisher
(@fisher)

Even tho i would be ok with it because Rawr vouches for him and  respect Rawr, i gotta say no to the application. You say you can type fast but your story makes no sense. Weird grammar, not one dot to seperate sentences and it doesnt really tell much except your character killed a zombie and scavanges a city. Thats about it o.O please don´t see it as insult, just my honest opinion and for a "remake" pretty not much tellng.

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Posted : 29/06/2017 1:16 pm
millster66
(@millster66)
Trusted Member Customer

(loud beep) Rec no.5 so to day mom was mad at dad because he was shouting on about a virus that turns people into zombies. I have been trying to sleep for the past hour but (loud explosion) I ran to the window but dad told me not to we quickley left the house to get to the car as we where driving down past electro a car came out of know where and hit us. I suddenly wake up to my mon being eaten alive my dad riped open the door and got me out we ran toward the motorway but as we got closer and closer the traffic got worse and worse immediately we had to get on the floor as the check us we where clean they escorted us to a big green truck. As we drived for about 2 hours we had to get of and we had to go to a room we started to settle in and live there for a bit 9 years later. (Beep)Rec no.57  So its my 18 birthday but forget about that i have joined the military i am going on my first food run but that chould be bad the more we grow the more bandits come to attack as a went to go sit down. I immediately had to get up the bandit group that attacked the school had came ready to take this place down but 2 men came out of the woods shooting the bandits this lasted 2-3 hours when it was done i went to go see the men and i decided to join them in the quest to find his girlfriend and his friends. The end theank for reading 

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Topic starter Posted : 30/06/2017 2:00 am
MrRawr
(@mrrawr)
Noble Member

Imo, millster's English is kinda good for somebody not from an English speaking background. It could be improved, sure, but it certainly crosses the divider. 

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Posted : 30/06/2017 7:18 am
millster66
(@millster66)
Trusted Member Customer

me surprise and girmm are going to play to gether if we get so i made a new story 

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Topic starter Posted : 30/06/2017 8:54 am
Grimm
(@grimm)
Eminent Member Customer

great friend, his broken english fits the way his character is set up. all you have to think about is the character, not the person behind the digital avatar. +1

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Posted : 03/07/2017 4:04 pm
About_30_ninjas
(@about_30_ninjas)
Estimable Member

Hey Millster, unfortunately I'm going to have to decline your application. Your backstory is broken and although its not a huge issue your broken English is a slight concern. 

                                -Ninjas

He was a coward. Being strong, not giving up. That was just his place to hide. He pushed away the pain so hard, he
disconnected himself from the person he loved the most. Sometimes when you win, you lose.

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Posted : 06/07/2017 5:48 pm
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