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coolguy
(@coolguy)
Active Member Customer

How old are you?:13

Are you somewhat fluent in speaking English?: yes

Why do you want to join the whitelisted roleplaying community?: I want to be part of this community so i can have a better roleplay experience with the unturned servers .

Do you have a working microphone?: yes 

Have you had any previous roleplaying experience? (if so we'd love to hear about it!): Yes in this other full rp server we had a base some bandits entered and arrested them but in the end we let them go.

Character background- Write a background for your character. Talk about how you ended up in the apocalypse and what sort of person your character is- try to keep things realistic: i was a scientist involved with the outbreak that realeased the zombie infection i was the only one that survived that night everyone was blasted by the shockwave that released the zombie virus. I woke up from a coma im guessing about a day after the explosion happened i tried to stand up but i could barely stand on my two feet properly. i opened the lab door i was completely shocked of what i had saw, fires everywhere sky dark as my mothers kitchen table, And there i saw it, a zombie i quickly grabbed sharp pointy thingy on the ground so i could protect myself . when i went to stab it a zombie to my left attacked me so i stabbed it on the side of its head ive never had done anything like that before but it seemed terrifying...

Steam profile URL: http://steamcommunity.com/id/PH30NIXSM

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Topic starter Posted : 29/06/2017 2:37 am
diggydoggy
(@diggydoggy)
Trusted Member Customer

Could be wayyyy better, but its ok ig. -1

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Posted : 29/06/2017 7:28 pm
diggydoggy
(@diggydoggy)
Trusted Member Customer

No, but for real, its pretty good you just should have more to add on to what you have now. Redo?

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Posted : 29/06/2017 7:30 pm
sydranexus
(@sydranexus)
Active Member Customer

nice

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Posted : 29/06/2017 7:43 pm
Opti
 Opti
(@elmomick)
Reputable Member Customer

Too cliché, why did you only survive out of all the scientists? Use less "I" to make it read easier. Perhaps mention something about before that, and perhaps a little snippet of what happened afterwards, did you meet anyone etc.. And do I get from your application you will not be able to wield a gun? Since even a knife was terrifying? Interesting!

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Posted : 29/06/2017 8:23 pm
MiniTanker12
(@minitanker12)
New Member Customer

He is a great role player and he doesn't kos and should be accepted

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Posted : 29/06/2017 9:28 pm
coolguy
(@coolguy)
Active Member Customer

thx sydra and mini tanker

 

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Topic starter Posted : 29/06/2017 11:49 pm
coolguy
(@coolguy)
Active Member Customer

by the way my character's name was Alexie kuznetsov brother of  nikoli kuznetsov

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Topic starter Posted : 29/06/2017 11:51 pm
Grimm
(@grimm)
Eminent Member Customer

could add a lot more. but good story so far

 

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Posted : 30/06/2017 1:26 am
coolguy
(@coolguy)
Active Member Customer

thanks

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Topic starter Posted : 30/06/2017 2:07 am
Dolan
(@dolan)
Reputable Member Customer

pretty neet

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Posted : 01/07/2017 8:09 am
coolguy
(@coolguy)
Active Member Customer

how do u know if u have been accepted

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Topic starter Posted : 02/07/2017 9:24 pm
PFQ
 PFQ
(@potionflingaqueen)
Honorable Member

Nylex will tell you you've been accepted, eh I have conflicted feelings about this so a 0. Nicht gut, nicht schlechte.

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Posted : 02/07/2017 10:24 pm
_Cool Guy_
(@_cool-guy_)
New Member

Yo why did you take my name

 

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Posted : 03/07/2017 12:26 am
MrRawr
(@mrrawr)
Noble Member

its literally the most cringiest name a kid could have, 'coolguy'

something seems wrong here, i can feel it. dont want him in. -1

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Posted : 03/07/2017 3:55 pm
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